As he opened the door, a rotten smell shot his nose. The paint crawled down the door frame as the floorboard creaked when he walked to his bed.
This is a part of my story where I used a writing strategy called "Show, Don't Tell". Here is and example: TELL - I had good supper last night. SHOW - Last night I slurped down some good food which was a palatable combination of sauce, veggies, spices, and spaghetti. My show don't tell was about one of the characters entering a house.
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